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I like the conciseness of your poem. The minimal words gives it an ominous feel and is extremely powerful. Your poem reminds me of a “If I can stop one heart from breaking” by Emily Dickinson- short, sweet, and powerful.
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Rupert Brooks' poem Peace is similar to this poem. I love how you turn from dark and scary to triumphant
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I like the conciseness of your poem. The minimal words gives it an ominous feel and is extremely powerful. Your poem reminds me of a “If I can stop one heart from breaking” by Emily Dickinson- short, sweet, and powerful.
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DeleteRupert Brooks' poem Peace is similar to this poem. I love how you turn from dark and scary to triumphant
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