I like the way the poem builds up toward stating the main point, like how the movement for this right has been steadily growing. This poem relates to your blackout poem in that both the poems are about gay marriage. The poem in this link advocates it (http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2014/09/27/until-we-could-richard-blanco_n_5890434.html).
I like how your poem only explicitly says same sex marriage at the end. The reader picks up on the meaning slowly. The poem in the link expresses that protests in favor of gay marriage and the struggle involved. https://barefootmeds.wordpress.com/2014/04/18/bookish-and-not-so-bookish-mostly-lgbt-thoughts/
I like the way the poem builds up toward stating the main point, like how the movement for this right has been steadily growing. This poem relates to your blackout poem in that both the poems are about gay marriage. The poem in this link advocates it
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I like how your poem only explicitly says same sex marriage at the end. The reader picks up on the meaning slowly. The poem in the link expresses that protests in favor of gay marriage and the struggle involved. https://barefootmeds.wordpress.com/2014/04/18/bookish-and-not-so-bookish-mostly-lgbt-thoughts/
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