Sunday, May 17, 2015

Survival


2 comments:

  1. I really like your poem, although I don't quite get what you're trying to convey @.@ Love the water analogy! :) This poem (http://hellopoetry.com/poem/913511/confusion/) reminds me of yours because things turned out different than what the narrator expected. :)

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  2. This poem by Edgar Allan Poe reminds me of yours in the way you both discuss the difficulty and meaning of life:

    http://www.poetryfoundation.org/poem/175776

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