I really like your poem, although I don't quite get what you're trying to convey @.@ Love the water analogy! :) This poem (http://hellopoetry.com/poem/913511/confusion/) reminds me of yours because things turned out different than what the narrator expected. :)
I really like your poem, although I don't quite get what you're trying to convey @.@ Love the water analogy! :) This poem (http://hellopoetry.com/poem/913511/confusion/) reminds me of yours because things turned out different than what the narrator expected. :)
ReplyDeleteThis poem by Edgar Allan Poe reminds me of yours in the way you both discuss the difficulty and meaning of life:
ReplyDeletehttp://www.poetryfoundation.org/poem/175776