Emily Dickinson is a chef
with words—she adds a dash of rhyme and meter to her work, a splash of unusual
punctuation and capitalization, and a drizzle of alternative word choices. She
adds many elements to her writing to make her work more interesting and unique
compared to other poets. Her unusual choices in her work can be compared to the
work that a chef does to his or her food. Although not seemingly similar at
first, there are many similarities between the art of cooking and the poetry of
Emily Dickinson.
A similarity between
Dickinson poetry and cooking is how one has to follow a formula or pattern but
can follow it loosely. Emily Dickinson seems to loosely follow a meter in most
of her poems. Although not necessarily the same between different poems, each
work generally follows a set number of syllables and stresses for each line.
One can easily see this example in poem 359 where she uses a short meter.
A Bird, came down the Walk -
He did not know I saw -
He bit an Angle Worm in
halves
And ate the fellow, raw,
Dickinson’s use of a meter is comparable to a recipe. She uses the
number of syllables that are required and fills in words with her imagination.
An almost identical process happens in cooking. A recipe is meant to be
followed, but only to a certain degree. One must follow the recipe a little,
otherwise the dish may not rise, could burn, or have bad flavor. However,
within the guidelines of the recipe there is room to be inventive. In a poem,
if a meter is not followed, there is a chance of the poem not sounding melodic
or bad to the ears. Similarly, a recipe must be followed to ensure that the
dish tastes good, but the food can still be unique to a chef.
One of the things
that makes the poetry of Emily Dickinson unique is her use of punctuation,
which adds spice to her writing. Dickinson is well known for her unusual
placement and choice of punctuation and capitalization. She often used dashes
and exclamation marks at the end of her lines, in addition to seemingly random
capitalization in the middle of a line, such as in the last line of her poem
number 372, where she writes “First - Chill - then Stupor - then the letting
go-.” There is no grammatical reason for her to capitalize the words or add the
dashes, however it adds interest to the work. Originally, this was often seen as
erroneous by editors and removed from the poems. However, her use of
punctuation makes her work unique and adds more flavor. Punctuation is to
Dickinson as spices are to cooking. Food tastes bland and nondescript without
the use of spices. Spices, such as a dash of cayenne pepper or nutmeg instantly
brings a meal to life. Seasoning gives the dish character and makes it more
interesting to the palate like punctuation works in writing.
Because Emily Dickinson never
intended for her poems to be published, she often left marks on the page with
possible changes to certain words[1]. Often the words that she
would supply as an alternative would have a completely different meaning
compared to the original. As the Emily Dickinson museum states: “Sometimes
words with radically different meanings are suggested as possible
alternatives.” The way Dickinson provided alternatives for her writing is much
like how a chef is able to use different ingredients to achieve the same flavor
or desired effect. If one does not have
buttermilk on hand, one can achieve the desired effect by mixing lemon juice
with milk and letting it sit for five minutes. Although it is not the same
product, the final result ends up being the same.
Emily Dickinson is like a
chef with her poetry. She adds punctuation and capitalization to add interest
to keep her poems from being bland, how a chef would add spices to his cooking
to achieve the same effect. Dickinson follows a meter loosely, however
sometimes strays just like how it is important to follow a recipe but one can
add a personal touch. Lastly, Dickinson provided possible different options for
some words in her poetry. Her doing this can be compared to using different
ingredients to achieve the same end result. Although one may not immediately
connect the two, there are many similarities between the work of Emily
Dickinson and the art of cooking.
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